终於终於地有了点感觉,而不再仅仅是进步.这是熟读和研究了几本关于如何写作的书的结果.有感觉了很高兴,不过顺便收获开心也很好玩,比如说这伟大的发现----人如果是实在地黔驴技穷的时候,就学习古人,静心地用笨办法,结果是那个出奇地好.

        快乐在於过程.实际是真得懂得点了天人写天语的基本规则,其实也有些很不好的感觉.首先,天人写天语的类别分得很是清晰,比如,政论,科普,科技论文等文章.这清晰还包括写各种文章有各种文章的规矩.其次,他们在这各类文章的规矩下,就是天语作家把那知识在嘴巴里咀嚼,然后在疑似口对口地喂养给天语读者.所以,这天堂的愚民是有更深刻的出处.其二,终於是知道了为什么他们天语很好,学识也高,可很多还是读书,和文作盲.原来啊,不是每个人都能够有机会做老奶奶,有机会咀嚼食物喂养小孙子,哈哈.

----哈哈,看来什么重要都没有这学习能力重要.有了这能力,人就在逼急能跳墙,甚至还有可能会跳出龙门来啊,呵呵.毛还是没有错-----人有胆多大,地确实是有多大产.

Ten principles for plain writing:

1 Prefer the active voice.

2 Do not make noun out of the good, strong “working verbs.”

3 Be concise. Cut out all excess baggage. Keep your average sentence length under 20 words.

4 Be specific. Use concrete terms instead of generalization.

5 Keep related sentence elements together; keep unrelated sentence elements apart. Place modifiers as close as possible to the words they are intended to modify.

6 Avoid unnecessary shifts of number, tense, subject, voice, or point of view. 

7 Prefer the simple word to the farfetched, and the right word to the almost right.

8 Do not repeat words, phrases, or idea needlessly. But do not hesitate to repeat when the repetition will increase clarity. 

9 Use parallelism whenever it is appropriate-----that is, when you are expressing similar thoughts, make sure you write your sentences so that the elements are in similar or parallel form. But do not use parallel structure when expressing thoughts that are not truly similar. 

10 Arrange your material logically. Always begin with ideas that reader can readily understand. If you must present difficult material, go one step at a time. Do not skip any steps. Arrange your format to give the reader every possible “handle” on the material.

Study and use these ten principles until they become second nature!!!!